Post by bebopalula on Sept 13, 2005 1:23:14 GMT
This is the opening chapter of a story that I felt I might wreck if I kept writing it. The challenge is to complete it. ;D have fun!
Planet Of Fears
The TARDIS shuddered to a halt and The Doctor looked up suprised.
"That's not right." He muttered.
Jack flicked up the screen to see where they had landed.
"What is it?" Rose asked as multiple symbols flashed past the screen. She looked over at The Doctor and she saw the colour drain from his face. She looked over at Jac and he didn't look much better.
"What does it say?" she persisted but then her question was answered as the english version flashed by.
PLANET OF FEARS
Rose swallowed.
"I take that it's bad."
The Doctor nodded.
"The Planet Of Fears has been around since the begining of time itself. Each and every time lord was once sent here as training. The TARDIS obviously thinks it's about time."
Jack let out a small whimper and Rose laughed at him.
"It can't be that bad can it?" Rose asked.
The Doctor looked around at her.
"You know how I said The TARDIS is telepathic?"
Rose nodded.
"Well, this whole planet is telepathic. It interperets every single fear you've ever had and it multiplys it and then creates a scenario. That scenario is what we have to face."
Rose's expression turned to terror and Jack started hyperventilating.
"Why can't we just leave?" Rose asked, almost pleading.
"Can't." The Doctor replied simply. "Facing your fear is clearance off the planet.
"Doctor, what do you mean scenario?" Rose asked feeling sick.
"The Planet's spirit feeds on your fears started off with the smallest,. plaing you in your fears' circumstance."
Jack's knees buckled and he hit the floor with a thump. Jack continued what The Doctor was saying.
"Then it builds up toyour worst fear in the worst possible circumstance incorporating everything that has ever scared you."
Rose trembled and her lunch climbed her throat. She raced to the nearest bathroom and made it to the sink just in time to vomit. When she went back to the control room only Jack was there, sitting in the same place staring at the words flashing past. Rose walked two doors dwon the corridor to the kitchen and found The Doctor sitting at the table. Rose sat next to him.
"I should have gone earlier." he began with. "When I didn't have as many things to be afraid of."
He looked up at Rose.
"And when I didn't know you. Now you have to go through it aswell."
Rose put her arm on his.
"I'll be fine, don't worry." she said.
The Doctor smiled weakly.
"I'm sorry Rose. I didn't mean to come here yet."
Rose felt her confidence seep away. The Doctor was frightened and it wasn't comforting.
"Hundreds of people have just satyed in their ships and dies of starvation rather than face their fears."
Rose swallowed and took a deep breath.
"Come on then." she said briskly, standing up.
The Doctor looked confused.
"Let's face our fears." she extended her hand and The Dotcor gripped it.
They entered the control room and Jack seemed to be pulling himself together.
"Are we going then?" his voice was crackly and weak.
"We are." said The DOtcor firmly.
He placed his hand on The TARDIS door ready to push it open.
"Doctor, will we be together?" Rose's large brown eyes outstared his own.
"I don't know." he said as he squeezed her hand and pushed open the door.
*
Well that's all I wrote. Good luck!
Planet Of Fears
The TARDIS shuddered to a halt and The Doctor looked up suprised.
"That's not right." He muttered.
Jack flicked up the screen to see where they had landed.
"What is it?" Rose asked as multiple symbols flashed past the screen. She looked over at The Doctor and she saw the colour drain from his face. She looked over at Jac and he didn't look much better.
"What does it say?" she persisted but then her question was answered as the english version flashed by.
PLANET OF FEARS
Rose swallowed.
"I take that it's bad."
The Doctor nodded.
"The Planet Of Fears has been around since the begining of time itself. Each and every time lord was once sent here as training. The TARDIS obviously thinks it's about time."
Jack let out a small whimper and Rose laughed at him.
"It can't be that bad can it?" Rose asked.
The Doctor looked around at her.
"You know how I said The TARDIS is telepathic?"
Rose nodded.
"Well, this whole planet is telepathic. It interperets every single fear you've ever had and it multiplys it and then creates a scenario. That scenario is what we have to face."
Rose's expression turned to terror and Jack started hyperventilating.
"Why can't we just leave?" Rose asked, almost pleading.
"Can't." The Doctor replied simply. "Facing your fear is clearance off the planet.
"Doctor, what do you mean scenario?" Rose asked feeling sick.
"The Planet's spirit feeds on your fears started off with the smallest,. plaing you in your fears' circumstance."
Jack's knees buckled and he hit the floor with a thump. Jack continued what The Doctor was saying.
"Then it builds up toyour worst fear in the worst possible circumstance incorporating everything that has ever scared you."
Rose trembled and her lunch climbed her throat. She raced to the nearest bathroom and made it to the sink just in time to vomit. When she went back to the control room only Jack was there, sitting in the same place staring at the words flashing past. Rose walked two doors dwon the corridor to the kitchen and found The Doctor sitting at the table. Rose sat next to him.
"I should have gone earlier." he began with. "When I didn't have as many things to be afraid of."
He looked up at Rose.
"And when I didn't know you. Now you have to go through it aswell."
Rose put her arm on his.
"I'll be fine, don't worry." she said.
The Doctor smiled weakly.
"I'm sorry Rose. I didn't mean to come here yet."
Rose felt her confidence seep away. The Doctor was frightened and it wasn't comforting.
"Hundreds of people have just satyed in their ships and dies of starvation rather than face their fears."
Rose swallowed and took a deep breath.
"Come on then." she said briskly, standing up.
The Doctor looked confused.
"Let's face our fears." she extended her hand and The Dotcor gripped it.
They entered the control room and Jack seemed to be pulling himself together.
"Are we going then?" his voice was crackly and weak.
"We are." said The DOtcor firmly.
He placed his hand on The TARDIS door ready to push it open.
"Doctor, will we be together?" Rose's large brown eyes outstared his own.
"I don't know." he said as he squeezed her hand and pushed open the door.
*
Well that's all I wrote. Good luck!